How I Can Persevere in the Shadowland of Dreams

How I Can Persevere in the Shadowland of Dreams
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In most cases, people can't insist their dreams until the last.



But when we during a 20-year career in the school to become a person with education . We should clinging determinedly to our dreams , let go it.



The reality is that school life is a boring , depressed , and affair.



Having a realistic universal necessity. For the truth is you must think about your future , career and affair.



For the first, you should attend all the classes and be on time. This is about your attitude towards study , it's important . Second , you should finish assignments to the best of your ability and come to class fully prepared. This methods can put you in control with study , and if you do this , you can improve apparently.



The third , and the core of study is having a time management. For one thing , you should plan your week and make a schedule , for another , you should make fullest use of time.



If you do this , you will find another wonderful life and make your life sunshine. Certainly , you can persevere in the shaowland of dreams.

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排名:共309篇,本文排名169,最高分88.5,最低分52

评语: 文中连接词和过渡词稍欠丰富,内容基本连贯,但文章行文稍欠流畅;文章能使用一些结构简单的长句,但是不能够熟练运用,文中一些从句的使用,为文章锦上添花,希望继续努力,再创佳绩;文章用词基本恰当,学术词汇较为丰富,此外注意文中个别拼写错误 类型 维度 测量值 参考范围

词汇 形符数 224 195~230

字数 195 166~208

类符数 104 93~115

平均词长 4.36 4.23~4.97

平均词长标准差 2.29 2.19~2.62

高频词汇占比 78% 77%~86%

学术词汇占比 7% 2%~7%

超纲词汇占比 8% 3%~8%

篇章连词 11 8~14

动词短语 7 7~17

段落 段落数 8 3~5

平均每段句数 1.88 2.49~5.52

平均每段词数 28.00 36.91~89.70

首段词数占比 4% 12%~43%

尾段词数占比 12% 6%~40%

首段句数占比 7% 11%~44%

尾段句数占比 13% 8%~41%

句子 句子数 15 11~17

平均句长 15 13~20

最长句词数 25 21~37

最短句词数 6 4~10

1~9词句子占比 7% 5%~32%

10~19词句子占比 79% 39%~70%

20~29词句子占比 13% 6%~36%

残句数 0 0~1

病句数 2 0~3

从句 从句总数 12 9~17

从句类型 6 4~6

不定式 0 1~5

现在分词 1 0~4

过去分词 3 0~1

主语从句 2 0~2

补语从句 3 1~5

wh-从句 2 0~4

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